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还有10天就考托福了作文很垃圾自己写了一篇托福作文请大家帮我评一下分数谢谢啦

Nowadays,aheateddiscussionspringsupastowhetherhighereducationbeavailabletoallstudentsoronlytogoodstudents.Somepeoplebelievethatacollegeoruniversityeducationshouldbeavailabletoallstudents.Whileothersbelievesitshouldbeavailableonlytogoodstudents.IfIwereforcedtoagreewithoneofthetwoselections.Istronglydeemthattheformeroneholdsmoreweight.TherearenumerousreasonstosupportmyopinionandIwouldexploreonlyafewofthemostimportantoneshere.

Oneoftheprimarycausesisthatallthepeoplehavetheequalrighttoreceivehighereducation.InChina,anoldsayingsgoes“allthepeople,nomatterwhatraceyouarefrom,havetheequalright.AndIthinkitincludestherighttoreceivehighereducationforeveryone.AgoodcaseinpointisthatinSouthKorea,thegovernmentadvocatedthatallthekoreanhavetherighttoreceiveeducation.Althoughsomerichpeoplemayrejectthiscreed,nearlyallthepopleinKoreasupportthisdecisionmadebygovernment.Thuswecanseethatmostpeopleagreewithmyfirstpoint.

Anotherreasontosupportmyopinionisthatanation’squalitywouldbepromotedifallthepeoplereceivehighereducation.Inotherwords,knowledge,abilityandsoonwillnotbepromotedifonlygoodstudentsreceivehighereducation.Wecanassumethatifonlyafewpeoplehavetherighttoreceiveeducation,andthenitisreasonabletoexpectthatthenationwouldnottobeastrongcountry,becausemostpeoplehavenoknowledgeorskilltosupporttheirnation.

Whileitistruethattheremaybeacoupleofadvantagesforonlyafewpeopletoreceivehigheducation.Howeverfromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,alltheevidencesupportsanunshakablethathighereducationshouldopentoallthepeople.Thusitisrecommendedthatgovernmentshouldincreasetheexpenseofeducationtosupportthispoint.Whileitisuptothemtomakethefinaldecisionwhichisinaccordancewiththeirvalueandsituation.

李治源回答:
  作文结构不错但有句子要改正一下的:1.Whileothersbelieveitshouldbeonlyavailabletogoodstudents.2.alltheevidencesupportsanunshakable(少了一个名词,可以用view/opinion等)thathighereduca...
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