Lastsummerholiday,lwenttoBeijing.Itwasquitehot.Therearemanygoodplaces,suchustheGreatWall,thesummerpalaceandtheForbiddenCity.IsawmanyforeignerstakingphotosontheGreatWall.ManykidsclimbedtheGreatWallwithoutthehelpoftheirparents.Ithinktheirparentswereproudofthem.Atlast,lsucceedinclimbingatthetopoftheGreatWall.SoIwasexcited.Inadditionto,thereweremanydelicioussnacksinBeijing.lthinkBeijingisworthavisit.
亲,这绝对是原创的!如果满意的话,请采纳我哦!
亲你只有100个字左右啊、、我要200字以上。。可以加一点么?至少作文得分3段吧、你修改一下我就给你采纳了
myvacationplansthesummervacationiscoming,manypeoplehavemanyplansduringthesummervacation,sodoi.iwanttogotoseetheseawithmyparents,theseaisverywonderful,icanswimintheseaandicaneattheseafood,ithingitwillbeverydelicious!ialsoplantovisittobeijiingwhichcityhasthegreatwallandthemingtombs.thegreatwallisthesymbolofthechina,manyvisitorsfrommanycountriesintheworldgotovisitthegreateveryyear,thosearemyvacationplans,ibelievemyvacationmustbeinterestingandexciting
这是接着上面的么?要不你写一个完整的我就采纳了。。