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高中英语修改FastFoodFastfoodisverypopularinChina.Childrenandteenagersarecrazyabouteattingthem.Thereasonswhysomanypeoplelikeeattingfastfoodareasfollows:Inthefirstplace,itisawasteoftimeforustoeatfastfood.I
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高中英语修改

FastFood

FastfoodisverypopularinChina.Childrenandteenagersarecrazyabouteattingthem.

Thereasonswhysomanypeoplelikeeattingfastfoodareasfollows:Inthefirstplace,itisawasteoftimeforustoeatfastfood.Itconvincesofthebusy,too.Secondly,wecannotonlyeatfastfoodintherestaurantbutalsoathome.Thesurroundings

intherestaurantiscleanandcomfortable.Weenjoyeattingfoodinit.Finally,thequantilyofthefastfoodisgood.Butitisnotverygoodforustogrowuphealthily.Ithaslittlenurtureinside.

Don'teatfastfoodeverymeal.Pleasedon'tlrtchildreneattoomuchfastfood,too.

帮忙看看哪里要改,满分30,能打几分

陈声树回答:
  1.fastfood是不可数名词   2.surround是副词不能加ing   3.Itconvincesofthebusy,too.这句话有问题,convince是及物动词,后面不加of,用法不对.   4.quantily质量拼错了,是quality   5.Finally,thequantilyofthefastfoodisgood.Butitisnotverygoodforustogrowuphealthily.既然说了品质好,怎么会对身体有害呢?应该改为Finally,thequalityofthefastfoodisnotverygoodanditisbadforourhealth.   6.最后一句的too去掉.   总的来说,作文语法错误很多,最多18.   不好意思,严格了点.
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