高中英语修改
FastFood
FastfoodisverypopularinChina.Childrenandteenagersarecrazyabouteattingthem.
Thereasonswhysomanypeoplelikeeattingfastfoodareasfollows:Inthefirstplace,itisawasteoftimeforustoeatfastfood.Itconvincesofthebusy,too.Secondly,wecannotonlyeatfastfoodintherestaurantbutalsoathome.Thesurroundings
intherestaurantiscleanandcomfortable.Weenjoyeattingfoodinit.Finally,thequantilyofthefastfoodisgood.Butitisnotverygoodforustogrowuphealthily.Ithaslittlenurtureinside.
Don'teatfastfoodeverymeal.Pleasedon'tlrtchildreneattoomuchfastfood,too.
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