英语好的请进来帮我求你了

IhaveanordinarymotherbutifeelveryluckybecauseshegavemeIneeditthemost,therealmotherlylove

wheniwasyoungIrememberwhenIcaughtafeveratmidnightlastyear,mymumtookmetothehospitalasfastasshecould.Whenwegothomeaftermyinjection,itwasabout5oclockintheearlymorning.Mymumonlyslept2hoursbecauseshehadtowakeupat7oclocktopreparebreakfastforme,andthenshewenttowork.Shemustbeverytiredthatday.

IlovemymotherverymuchshejustLikemanyotherChinesewomen,mymotherisdiligent.kindandsincere.Shegetsalongwithherneighborsandcolleagues.Whentheyhave

difficulties,sheisalwaysreadytolendthemahelpfulhand.Thereforesheislovedandrespectedinourneighborhood.

Motheroftentellsmetobehonestandupright.Sheexpectsmetobeusefultothepeopleinthefuture.Uptonow,Istillrememberhersaying:Doasmuchasyoucanandyouwillsucceed.

Mymotherisalsoathriftyandindustriouswoman.Shesaveseverypennythatshecantokeepeverythinginorder.sheoftensaystome,"workwhileyouwork,playwhileyouplay.Ifyoudidnotwork,youwillbecomelazyandofnousetothesociety."Ithinksheisright

Mymumisnotverybeautiful,butIadmireandloveher

Finally,themostimportantis:first,Imostdon'twanttodescribepeopleismymother

ithinkanyspecificadjectiveformother'sloveformeisablasphemy

ButmyEnglishisverybad

ButeventuallyIdecidedtospeak

BecauseIhopethesecanplaylittleeffect

Studyisbadisokay,butdon'tharmthebody,lesseatsnacks.lessplaycomputer

spendmoretimewithparents,andtalktothem

thatalsoispiety

这是我写的为了我妈妈语法哪里错误了可以指出来吗?只要复制粘贴下来错的那句话就可以了我自己弄明白在哪了另外如果对这片短文有很么建议求你一定要讲给我