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雅思大作文给分给社区帮助还是直接捐钱到国际组织,谈谈你观点和原因Helppeoplewhenyouareabletohelp.Ibelievethatonlyyouareinthecapablesituationthatcanyouprovidehelptotheothers,Ialsobelievethatonly
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雅思大作文给分

给社区帮助还是直接捐钱到国际组织,谈谈你观点和原因

Helppeoplewhenyouareabletohelp.Ibelievethatonlyyouareinthecapablesituationthatcanyouprovidehelptotheothers,Ialsobelievethatonlyourcommunitybecomesmorestrongerthatcantheyhelppeoplecomefromothercountriesorcountrieswhichneedoursupport.

Communityisasmallunitcomparingwiththenationalorinternationalorganizations,Iampronetosupportthefirstpointofview-helpthecommunity.firstly,weliveincommunity,sometimesitseemedthatwecanprovideontimeandsuitablehelptothemthroughdirectcommunicationwiththem.secondly,weunderstandtheshortcomingsandstrongpointsofthecommunityverywell,sowecouldsuggesttocommunityleadershowthingsshouldrun,wearetogethertobuildourmoderncommunity.Inanothermeaning,tohelpcommunityandinternationalorganizationsmakenodifference.

Communitycanalsoaskustohelpwhenitcomestothenationalorinternationalorganizations,forinstance,earthquakefromHaidi,povertyfrompartofAfricacountry,wecandonatemoney,clothes,drinkingetc.itmakeourhelpprocesssmoothandeffective,evenenableustryourbesttohelptheothers,becausewhentroublecomes,webecomemoreregularandorganized

Tosummary,itembodiedourkindlyandenthusiasmthatwhetherprovidehelptocommunityordonatemoneytointernationalorganization.Itisjustthatweneeddifferentmethodtoexpressthem,thebestapproachofhelpingothersviaourgovernmentplanandefficientactors.

雅思A类大作文能给几分急等

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  5分吧,请原谅我太直接.你还需要大量的练习.句子不地道,表达不出自己想表达的意思.我相信考官是看不懂你的意思的.   在你的句子达到一定水平后再考虑段落和句子的连接吧,一步一步走.
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